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[Weaam]

I hope my labtop is secure,to do not have Viruses again​

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Queen الملكه​

I'd rather use "and will" instead of "to do". I will definitely consider rephrasing.

 

[Weaam]

I wish to have better Eid next year​

pain​

I'd use "a" before "better Eid". What do you think?

 

[Weaam]

nowadays you can not see ugly girls because of the Cosmetic surgery​

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fashion الموضه​

Ok.
Grammatically, it's correct. But style-wise, I'd write it as follows
Thanks to plastic surgeons, there is no ugly girl these days!

 

[Weaam]

أنا مو قاعدة أصحح لأحد طبعاً.. أنا بس أقول ملاحظاتي ولو أنا اللي كتبتها كيف راح أكتبها. عشان نستفيد أكثر
وأنتوا بعد feel free إنكم تعلقون على جملي وتقولون لي كيف ممكن تكتبونها لو كنتوا مكاني

 

[بوح الجروح]

^^^^^

زين اللي تسوينه


اذا شفتي خطأ بالقواعد صححي خلينا نستفيد

 

[نسج الورود]

هلا وئام

تصححين ... تعدلين ... كله مقبول

وهذا الأفضل .........

مو لو عندنا قسم للأنجليزي يكون أفضل ........

شكرا لك :وردة:​

 

[!...ωαнαм...!]

الله يجزاكم خير على التعاون


وئام feel free to write any things



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[الكاشونة]

الله يجزاكم خير على التعاون


وئام feel free to write any things



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No need for the " S " here

أعتقد و الله أعلم

 

[!...ωαнαм...!]

the word is incorrect if it was written in Arabic but it is okay to use it as a plural in English

No need for the " S " here

أعتقد و الله أعلم

 

[!...ωαнαм...!]

me too :إستحسان:
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I'd use "a" before "better Eid". What do you think?

 

[huali]

شنو الكلمة الجايّه يلا ....

 

[!...ωαнαм...!]

weaam

what is your word
?
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You don't need the "a" here.. maybe prior to "friendly" would be more appropriate.
And chinwag for those who never heard of, is a British informal word for chit-chat.

STARE
The young lady kept staring at the old lady's upper lip.

 

[الكاشونة]

the word is incorrect if it was written in Arabic but it is okay to use it as a plural in English

I doubt it

Nevertheless , I think both of us need Weaam for final decision

 

[!...ωαнαм...!]

^^^

alkashona , in fact you r right about it

i made it wrong

it should be like that anything

best regards


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[Weaam]

Next word: anything

 

[فاطمة حسين العلي]

Next word: anything

hey weaam ....long time sister
anything new too tell ?

 

[huali]

being anything in this life, is better than being nothing!

source: huali quotes
lol

try this:
breathless

 

[الكاشونة]

hey weaam ....long time sister
anything new too tell ?

extra ( o ) i.e. to

 

[huali]

hey weaam ....long time sister
anything new too tell ?

It must be a question word previous to your sentence

too=to

 

[Weaam]

being anything in this life, is better than being nothing!

source: huali quotes
lol

try this:
breathless

She was breathless when I met her! She's trying to loose weight.

Next word: gasp